tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1739833836413512251.post7760134938476477459..comments2023-04-08T06:12:52.366-06:00Comments on THE WAY EYE SEE IT: At DuskS.E.Ingrahamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1739833836413512251.post-9721021080266094122012-04-17T19:24:15.816-06:002012-04-17T19:24:15.816-06:00Oops - I see I never did get back here - not to th...Oops - I see I never did get back here - not to thank those of you who came here and kindly read and made comments and certainly not to write something more positive ...S.E.Ingrahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1739833836413512251.post-10064220745913211702012-04-12T18:45:26.331-06:002012-04-12T18:45:26.331-06:00Oddly enough, dusk is one of my favourite times of...Oddly enough, dusk is one of my favourite times of day ... but these words seemed to lend themselves to a peculiar bit of darkness only ... oh well ... thanks for coming by and reading, dropping a line or two - I appreciate it.S.E.Ingrahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1739833836413512251.post-37599026361558030452012-04-10T16:18:13.656-06:002012-04-10T16:18:13.656-06:00Well Sharon, I guess we both did not see, hopeful....Well Sharon, I guess we both did not see, hopeful. However, I love this poem; such a sad truth.Sara McNultyhttp://purplepeninportland.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1739833836413512251.post-21633698192027056512012-04-09T18:18:12.829-06:002012-04-09T18:18:12.829-06:00Love the flow of these lines:
Gone to the store
...Love the flow of these lines: <br /><br />Gone to the store<br />For smokes<br />For good<br /><br /><br />Nice work, Sharon.De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1739833836413512251.post-70052738664689686392012-04-08T19:53:52.881-06:002012-04-08T19:53:52.881-06:00a sad state, too often true. Excellent wordlea sad state, too often true. Excellent wordleMark Windhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01662876682127886074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1739833836413512251.post-54947041294174420322012-04-08T19:14:31.870-06:002012-04-08T19:14:31.870-06:00And a sad destiny it is indeed.And a sad destiny it is indeed.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1739833836413512251.post-15935695000302586482012-04-08T17:55:27.749-06:002012-04-08T17:55:27.749-06:00Well crafted...I like the voicem of the piece. My...Well crafted...I like the voicem of the piece. My favorite are the last two lines of the first stanza.brenda whttp://undercaws.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1739833836413512251.post-28250953778585676902012-04-08T16:37:48.845-06:002012-04-08T16:37:48.845-06:00Dark, and unfortunately all too real sometimes. Ni...Dark, and unfortunately all too real sometimes. Nicely done, Sharon.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1739833836413512251.post-48257838121615085572012-04-08T16:29:24.711-06:002012-04-08T16:29:24.711-06:00I once worked with a gal who had three children fr...I once worked with a gal who had three children from three different fathers. Some are lucky though when the last man stays and loves them all...mother and children. Though that is the exception. Well wordled. <br />Even 'I' went down a darker road...Juleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00571987715911379165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1739833836413512251.post-74787190772107946822012-04-08T14:52:21.512-06:002012-04-08T14:52:21.512-06:00Oh dear. It seems most of us went down the slopes ...Oh dear. It seems most of us went down the slopes with the words this week. <br />Great imagery and, use of the prompt words though:)Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.com