Wednesday, January 8, 2014

THIS IS NEW















She looked the new year right in the face
Shouted loud, "Bring It!", make it novel, unused
Give me excitement and pick up the pace

Then threw back her head, laughed deep and long
Felt instinctively this time she'd not be refused
This year she'd write new words to that tired old song





10 comments:

  1. Novel and unused, here it comes, so there will be new words! The energy of this poem infected me with the urge to make it truly new. Bravo!

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  2. New words to a tired old song - love this, i must admit i sometimes feel like this.

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  3. Ah, this is every poet's dream, I think.....to write those NEW words! And don't we feel good when we manage to accomplish just that!!!!

    Great to see you at Poets United!

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  4. I like her gusto! I hope this year brings some of that excitement too!

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  5. This is a great response to the prompt....."Bring it!", the laughter, writing "new words to a tired old song". I, too, am excited about all of the new words we will write and read this year. Yippee!

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  6. Bless you all for indulging my hubris in announcing my attitude running full tilt at this year! I very much appreciate all the comments!

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  7. Great energy in your poem! Wonderful positive attitude as the year starts.

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  8. loved the energy very novel refreshing!

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  9. What a defiant piece of work. Great writing.

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