Before the new moon has fully set
A lone wolf, reluctant to stray
Becomes entranced by a murmur on the wind
His senses are answering some innate call
El lobo, dark and smoky as soot, lopes
Down through the foothills, across fields
And onto the cement that is the city
The closer he gets to civilization, people
The more cumbersome his winter-thick pelt
Still, his step is unfaltering as he hurries on
Not knowing why or when he will stop, or if
The last of his species knows not how to lie down
Will run out his life 'til it's done or is taken ...
S.E.Ingraham©
I love the second stanza, when the city shows up, then such sadness sets in.
ReplyDeleteThank you Brenda ... I love wolves in an insane way and fear they are on their way out ... such sadness will eventually set in ... I see I left a word out (map) inadvertently - it was in the draft; if I can remember how it went, I'll remedy it ... thanks again, for dropping by and for the excellent words.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written and a great use of the wordle. Your poem captures the plight of so many animals who must adapt to urban encroachment on their habitats if they want to survive.
ReplyDeleteInteresting take on the words.
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Wonderfully written poem, I just love that last stanza!
ReplyDeleteWow.
ReplyDeleteThat was quite an exquisite wordle. Loved every line. Especially the angle from the wolf's perspective.
PS Nice background photo.
I have goose-bumps on my spine...love it!
ReplyDeleteI kept having to remind myself this is a wordle, I became so caught up in wolf.
ReplyDeleteI was sort of holding my breath from the first hint of the poor wolf's plight, from the title itself...
ReplyDeleteWell wordled! :)
There is a place for all...I have heard Brother Wolf howl - hopefully some are free and not all are in zoos.
ReplyDeleteThanks to all who came in support of the last wolf; I'm glad you liked the poem and appreciate your kind words ...
ReplyDeleteGood write. I too, didn't notice the wordle words within this, Sharon.
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Thanks flaubert - I think that's one of the highest compliments I can receive ... hearing that the wordle words aren't noticed ...
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